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Nick Chapman-Jones's avatar

More than a trifling; very nice work, I appreciate the allusions I recognize, and it evokes the feeling that there are more within I missed. I love poems that admit we do not much know ourselves.

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The first 2 stanzas evoked Ezekiel's vision, the Unicorn Tapestries and Beowulf for me... Kind of like the swapping out of nouns and verbs to act as different parts of speech. Floor boards eeking, unicorns paradising aside. Is "Joshua" meant to be a promised-land or impossible-victory reference?

I really enjoyed this, thanks so much for sharing!

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