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Mary Angela Douglas's avatar

The soundscape of this poem is fantastic and fantastically original; kinestheticly perfect You can imbibe the scene, so clearly sketched and it reminds me mysteriously of both Gerard Manley Hopkins and Dylan Thomas. Utterly original. Visceral and striking.

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Graham Pardun's avatar

This poem is sweet honey and nostalgic car-rust and takes place on the Earth that you and I currently inhabit. I love it. I was kind of doing the burn-through-it-all post-lunch substack thing, and when I hit "iron body off the northern highway" and heard the sounds, i stopped, took a breath, and actually read the thing. and then re-read. it's lovely as hell, and is better than going to church.

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